Comments on: ZOMBIE HOSPITAL by Thomas Lee Joseph Smith http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/ Works of Zombie Apocalypse Fiction Tue, 6 Jan 2009 07:31:06 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Stephanie http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/comment-page-1/#comment-637 Stephanie Sat, 09 Aug 2008 20:09:27 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/#comment-637 Sick, hilarious and wonderful! Sick, hilarious and wonderful!

]]> By: Andrew Burke http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/comment-page-1/#comment-17 Andrew Burke Thu, 30 Aug 2007 05:09:58 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/#comment-17 I like your design of this story. I could see this as a comedy short film. one suggestion would be to keep the zombies close to traditional "stupid" so that they dont show any intelligence whatosever. that would make the small situations where they stumble into things more funny. ex. if there was a way to have the phone call work without the zombie ever saying something. that might be funny. just a suggest. I like your design of this story.
I could see this as a comedy short film.
one suggestion would be to keep the zombies close to traditional “stupid” so that they dont show any intelligence whatosever. that would make the small situations where they stumble into things more funny.

ex. if there was a way to have the phone call work without the zombie ever saying something. that might be funny.
just a suggest.

]]> By: Tom Hamilton http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Tom Hamilton Sun, 26 Aug 2007 04:15:20 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/21/zombie-hospital-by-thomas-lee-joseph-smith/#comment-11 A lot of thought went in to the situations. This story is clever and fun. I love it! A lot of thought went in to the situations. This story is clever and fun. I love it!

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