Comments on: GRANDMOTHER SAYS by J. Michael http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/grandmother-says-by-j-michael/ Works of Zombie Apocalypse Fiction Tue, 6 Jan 2009 03:33:03 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: Andrew Burke http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/grandmother-says-by-j-michael/comment-page-1/#comment-15 Andrew Burke Thu, 30 Aug 2007 04:49:13 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/grandmother-says-by-j-michael/#comment-15 I like your use of descriptions here. the smoke covering the stars is simple and gives the reader the chance to draw their own pictures. I assume that the skill cookies and bone bread are indications at how society and culture has changed since the WWZ. as writers we often miss the long reaching effects of events such as post-WWZ halloween or other remembereances that would have come out of the panic, et al. AB. I like your use of descriptions here. the smoke covering the stars is simple and gives the reader the chance to draw their own pictures.

I assume that the skill cookies and bone bread are indications at how society and culture has changed since the WWZ. as writers we often miss the long reaching effects of events such as post-WWZ halloween or other remembereances that would have come out of the panic, et al.

AB.

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