Comments on: THE VETERAN by J. Michael http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/the-veteran-by-j-michael/ Works of Zombie Apocalypse Fiction Tue, 6 Jan 2009 09:40:02 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7 hourly 1 By: David http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/the-veteran-by-j-michael/comment-page-1/#comment-892 David Sat, 15 Nov 2008 17:26:43 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/the-veteran-by-j-michael/#comment-892 I think if you blow a body apart and/or shred it with schrapnel, it would then be easier to put a bullet into the skull. Anything to disable and slow down an advance. Napalm would also work. Burn everything to ash. I think if you blow a body apart and/or shred it with schrapnel, it would then be easier to put a bullet into the skull. Anything to disable and slow down an advance. Napalm would also work. Burn everything to ash.

]]> By: Andrew Burke http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/the-veteran-by-j-michael/comment-page-1/#comment-16 Andrew Burke Thu, 30 Aug 2007 04:53:35 +0000 http://talesofworldwarz.com/stories/2007/08/23/the-veteran-by-j-michael/#comment-16 i think that you are a very entertaining poet and you draw images very well. one point that i would bring up is the ineffectiveness of bombs on zombies. explosives generate a pressure wave and heat in addition to the initial shock and bits of shrapnel/debris. each of these things are less-than-effective on zach. unless this is nuclear. not a big point but i avoided it in a few stories of mine. i think that you are a very entertaining poet and you draw images very well.

one point that i would bring up is the ineffectiveness of bombs on zombies.

explosives generate a pressure wave and heat in addition to the initial shock and bits of shrapnel/debris.

each of these things are less-than-effective on zach. unless this is nuclear.

not a big point but i avoided it in a few stories of mine.

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