Comments on: STORAGE SPACE by Dominick Muzio

By: jake

jake — Mon, 05 Jan 2009 09:32:43 +0000

1st time reading this. i cant believe Leo died. he was the only marksmen of the group. pretty screwed up in like 10 ways. suicide, murder, stupidness, etc. great story. i enjoyed the gut wrenching 30 minutes it took me to read this. i felt like i was in the warehouse. time for Gary to repopulate the world LOL.

By: Ed

Ed — Mon, 22 Dec 2008 02:52:08 +0000

felt like Hitchcock. good story

By: Zoe

Zoe — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 14:41:47 +0000

Wow that was really scary. Loved it it had me on the edge of my seat. And it was refreshing that everyone didn’t die at the end. Thanks

By: SMEAR

SMEAR — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 08:57:21 +0000

Poor Leo.

By: ghoststalker

ghoststalker — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 20:54:54 +0000

i love the little bright note at the end, this is a really good story

By: Bret

Bret — Sun, 04 May 2008 04:21:07 +0000

Good story! Nice plot, good pacing. I really felt like I was there.

I had a hard time keeping track of all the characters. You were able to really make some of them stand out (like Brian). I suspect you have to do that in a story like this one.

I really liked that you stayed true to the “Romero” style. It can be done with great results!

By: Pat Conrad

Pat Conrad — Sun, 23 Mar 2008 01:34:49 +0000

Dominick, Great story. Very believable in terms of crisis behavior, loss of control over the immediate environment, and the resultant drawn out, dull terror of waiting. Well done.

By: Mark

Mark — Thu, 20 Mar 2008 19:08:53 +0000

Despite the fact that the grammar and spelling were a bit off, this story was great. The intensity of your writing allowed me to picture the events as they took place. The story captivated my interest, but be sure to look your next one over a bit more thoroughly.

I look forward to reading more.

By: gary

gary — Thu, 28 Feb 2008 20:37:08 +0000

It was a good story, but you need to revise your heights. Remember that 3ft = yard, so your huge fireball is 5 yards high and your rooftop of citywide views and death plunges is not even a measly 7 yards! Other than that, good job.

By: Satisfied Reader

Satisfied Reader — Mon, 11 Feb 2008 04:39:53 +0000

This was a great story because it simply took you into the life of an everyday man and how life had FORCED him into a situation he wasn’t prepared for. Not only does he have to survive a horde of undead creatures that feed 24/7, but he has become the defacto leader of a small group of survivors.

It really makes the reader asks, “Would I do anything different. . .could I?”

I’m really hoping that you write a sequel to this story or at least more stories for this page.