Comments on: RUDY’S THANKSGIVING by Vlad McCleod

By: AtomicWarBaby

AtomicWarBaby — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 17:24:01 +0000

One of the best short Zombie tales. The census takers would probably be sent out in pairs though, so they could watch each other’s backs & spell one another, sleep in shifts. Working alone, you’d be an easy target.

By: Zoe

Zoe — Mon, 28 Jul 2008 14:05:32 +0000

That was the creepiest part, they were gonna use Rudy’s eyes for the snowman. Pretty scary story. I liked it.

By: SMEAR

SMEAR — Fri, 25 Jul 2008 21:20:31 +0000

So,what was up with the zombie kid pointing at his eyes,then at the snowman?That wasnt very clear…at least to me.I had a rough night,lots of graffiti and fence hopping.

By: Vlad McCleod

Vlad McCleod — Sun, 30 Mar 2008 06:17:26 +0000

Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for letting me know.

By: Arna

Arna — Fri, 28 Mar 2008 01:33:15 +0000

Excellent!! I loved it =D

By: Vlad McCleod

Vlad McCleod — Sun, 10 Feb 2008 19:33:18 +0000

Thanks, Mike.

Happy you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to let me know. You may be right, an extra line–or maybe even a well placed word or two–might smooth that transition.

By: Mike

Mike — Sun, 03 Feb 2008 01:49:29 +0000

This was a tight, fun read. Very unique take on the theme. I loved Rudy’s understated work-weariness, and a census taker counting down to zero is classic. The last bit with the kid bashing his head in could be transitioned better, but a totally enjoyable read, overall!