Comments on: THE DESOLATE HIGHWAYS OF EDEN by Patrick M. Tracy

By: Draven

Draven — Wed, 19 Nov 2008 16:30:53 +0000

ok it was really good but didnt he get bitten by the kid in the beginning?…

By: ico

ico — Mon, 22 Sep 2008 05:31:37 +0000

Great story. I found it to be smart and a great read. You could easily get something publshed. My one complaint is that i found it to be too wordy, it doesnt drag it down or anything but i did find myself skipping a sentence here and there just to go on with the story. But, once again, it was a great read.

By: Andrew

Andrew — Thu, 18 Sep 2008 04:39:45 +0000

You obviously put alot of workinto this, and i realy enjoyed it. i to thought you could have cut back on the gun walk but oth than that it was great. great job at wraping up the ending, it was open but wasnt a total cliff hanger. keep up the good work :)

By: Oppressed1

Oppressed1 — Mon, 01 Sep 2008 16:02:07 +0000

Excellently done, I applaud you. I myself am currently in the works of writing a story, which someday I hope to turn into a novel. I believe that you should consider the same course of action, why not turn a hobby into a paycheck?

By: Zoe

Zoe — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 14:24:02 +0000

Thank you so much for a great story. Please Iwant to read part 11 soon. You are a fantastic writer keep it up. Thanks again.

By: Derek

Derek — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 17:16:14 +0000

Amazing story, It had me gripped from start to finish.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 21:33:47 +0000

Patrick,
I just read your story and all I can say is this: EXCELLENT READ!! I really enjoyed the story. Please, put out as many parts as you can stand. I love a good zombie story and this one definitely qualifies. Thanks again and keep writing.

Glenn

By: Patrick M. Tracy

Patrick M. Tracy — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 15:15:52 +0000

Sandy, Tim, Jim, Paul:

Thanks much. Glad you enjoyed it. I hope to have more stories to share in the semi-near future.

By: Paul Genesse

Paul Genesse — Thu, 03 Jul 2008 10:18:52 +0000

Patrick,

Excellent story. I really enjoyed it and I think it’s strong work, very professional. Some of the people who commented aren’t accustomed to a smart character with a big vocabulary, but I think it fit with this story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to part two.

Paul Genesse, Author and Editor
Author of The Golden Cord
Book One of the Iron Dragon Series

By: Jim

Jim — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 19:37:03 +0000

Good story, kept me reading and reading - couldn’t stop. Hope you follow through with your second part.