Comments on: WHISTLEBLOWERS by Levi Hill

By: Steve

Steve — Wed, 27 Aug 2008 21:39:00 +0000

Excellent story, and funny to me, cause after reading WWZ, I started looking at my commuter train in a whole new light. Armor over the doors and windows with firing slits, no way Zack could climb up to the cabin on the locomotive, as long as the railways were good, and you had fuel, it’d be a great way to get out of an urban area. This was a great idea too!

By: Derek

Derek — Thu, 17 Jul 2008 18:18:27 +0000

Excellent story, Very WWZ. I could actually see this being thought up.

By: Zoe

Zoe — Tue, 15 Jul 2008 14:39:00 +0000

I really enjoyed this one. Reads like a chapter out of the book. Thanks.

By: Glenn

Glenn — Wed, 09 Jul 2008 21:39:55 +0000

Wow, what a great ride (pun intended). I’m truly suprised that Max didn’t think of that one himself. Just like the others said, this truly reads like a chapter from the book. Keep writing man, you’ve got the knack.

By: Mark O'Neill

Mark O'Neill — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 13:35:29 +0000

What more logical way to get the G’s out of cities and into level playing field for the Army groups to eradicate them. I always wondered how they managed to flush a city. The book touches upon urban warfare, but usually only the flubs, like Yonkers and Kiev.

By: Myk

Myk — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 04:51:30 +0000

Very fine work. It reads like a chapter right out of WWZ. Good job.

By: Pat

Pat — Sat, 28 Jun 2008 11:56:01 +0000

Brilliant. Very nice touch to it.

Different fromthe other stories in a sense, that he was trying to survive, but he has a job to do and he knows what he’s getting into.

Good work.

By: Mike Barker

Mike Barker — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 20:43:50 +0000

Kudos. You brought a new element into the WWZ. the train is brilliant and the fact that you can see the survivors from the train adds real depth.

By: Levi

Levi — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 13:56:19 +0000

Thanks for all the kind words. This is really my first foray into writing, so the encouragement is most welcome! Glad everyone has enjoyed it and I will be sure to submit a few more stories.

By: Ben

Ben — Fri, 27 Jun 2008 13:43:11 +0000

Fantastically written, it kept me riveted until the very end.