Comments on: ALL THAT REMAINS by Joshua Scribner

By: Andre

Andre — Sat, 27 Dec 2008 05:16:00 +0000

All the slipping could easily be explained by her slipping in her own blood from a cut suffered in the first fall. Other than that it was great and on the money psychologically.

By: AtomicWarBaby

AtomicWarBaby — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 07:05:24 +0000

The guy was someone the girl loved, come on, you’d be stumbling too if your lover comes back to you as a fracking zombie, and you’re all alone out in the boonies.

Great short story, loved the twist w/ the dog as her companion, helping her keep her sanity, and how the dog defended her.

By: Joshua

Joshua — Wed, 23 Jul 2008 21:00:22 +0000

I agree about all the stumbling, ruins an otherwise great story.

By: Joe from Philly

Joe from Philly — Mon, 21 Jul 2008 19:12:18 +0000

That story was money, good job. And for the guy who got frustrated by the falling I feel bad he missed the entire point of the story.

By: Reader

Reader — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 22:51:49 +0000

Why the hell does this girl slip and fall so many times. Seriously, after the 3rd time I really stopped reading because I was getting frustrated.

By: Christiane

Christiane — Sun, 13 Jul 2008 04:08:52 +0000

Very Son of Sam! Awesome story!

By: Jeff

Jeff — Sat, 12 Jul 2008 01:31:46 +0000

I really enjoyed this short. It was a very cool twist on how solitude and loneliness can bring forth parts of our memory as a companion, but also so much more. Very good read. I was truly scared for a minute when the zombie was shot the first time and kept on walking towards her.

Job well done.