Comments on: ZOMBIE STORY by Christopher Fisher

By: Andre

Andre — Wed, 17 Dec 2008 07:10:57 +0000

Will you grammar jerks layoff already? The story was great! It would make a really good sort subject film too. I would love to do it if you give me permission to work it into a screenplay.

You have a great style and the setting was perfect. I also liked the dead soldier shambling up to the house near the end. It really connected you with the chaos of the outside world without having to go there which made it even scarier.

You making her a soldier was representative of everything lost. Safety, democracy, beauty, freedom, protection from foreign invasion and all of it gone leaving us isolated and alone. Vert sad and creepy. Keep writing.

By: Georgia

Georgia — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 16:14:04 +0000

Awwww…

I like the progression of this story.

By: Brandon Ross

Brandon Ross — Tue, 23 Sep 2008 21:51:54 +0000

Hey, as a fellow writer and author, FANTASTIC MATE!

You should write short stories like this and publish them!

You got the skills, mate!

By: Bill Bultas

Bill Bultas — Mon, 22 Sep 2008 02:12:18 +0000

Quite good. If the minor typos that have been mentioned were fixed, I would think this would be print-worthy.

By: Zoe

Zoe — Mon, 08 Sep 2008 15:54:31 +0000

Come on you guys, how bout some new stories.

By: l man

l man — Fri, 05 Sep 2008 13:14:50 +0000

that was an interesting story

By: Pete Bevan

Pete Bevan — Fri, 05 Sep 2008 11:24:55 +0000

Dutch oven has a different meaning in the UK. I know I shouldn’t laugh.

Nice story tho

By: Joe from Philly

Joe from Philly — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 14:31:53 +0000

You should be proud of this one, really nice job.

By: Ted W

Ted W — Tue, 02 Sep 2008 09:22:58 +0000

I liked it. Good balance. Its obvious that you put some thought into it.

By: Arna

Arna — Mon, 01 Sep 2008 19:39:18 +0000

Great Story!