FIRST RACE by Quartermaster
December 21, 2010 Short stories
Even using heavy equipment, explosives, and fire, it had taken the whole winter to set up the race course. Every time the weather warmed up above freezing, we had to stop and retreat to our holes. Fortunately, this was one of the coldest winters in thirty years, which gave us almost 100 days to work from dawn to dusk, from mid-November to the last cold days of March. Deepening or digging the pits was the hardest, most grueling work of all although getting the track walls high enough was a close second. However, we expected it was all going to be worth it when the flag came down, the engines revved up, and our fans literally clawed their way onto the course. Doing this kind of construction and prep work close to a major city these days seemed to just be asking for trouble but the Chief was adamant. He told us again and again that putting the course out in the boondocks wouldn’t give us the huge crowds that would make this event profitable enough to justify our efforts.
On April 15Th, we’d had almost ten nights with temperature well above freezing. With a stiff wind coming out of the northwest, all the flags were snapping on their poles. The Chief had called all of us over the intercoms and radios the night before to have all crews ready near their pits, the gate guards at their posts, and all drivers at their vehicles. At exactly 7:00 a.m., the speakers along the mile square perimeter walls blared out “All My Rowdy Friends” followed by every Southern Rock favorite from the heyday of Talledega. The gate guards began to report that the fans were beginning to move towards us, a few at first, followed by dozens, and then hundreds.   The speakers along most of the perimeter shut down except for four along the main gates. Soon we all learned that there were over 25,000 or more fans outside the main gates with thousands more coming out from the city and ‘burbs. This was a better turnout that even the Chief had expected but he was confident that with our training and prep work, we could handle it.
The big checkered flag dipped near the start of the course, the green lights flashed, the horns blew, and the gates began to slide back into the walls. Our fans poured in along the main concourse, until our counters passed 15,000 and the heavy hydraulic gates began to close up again helped along by our wall security guards armed with scoped rifles, grenades, and light ground charges on the approaches, to back off the tens of thousands still waiting to get in.
The first group of fans had piled up against a chain link fence about 100 yards inside the main gates, spilling into the cul-de-sacs on each side where low volume music came from the little speakers. Suddenly, the sound of motorcycle engines started up on the inner side of the fence as three Brothers of the Three Degrees Road Club revved up their Harleys. The sound and sight of these famous riders was too much for the fans to bear as they suddenly broke down the chain link and began to pour towards them like an unstoppable wave. The Brothers took off at a leisurely pace as the horde of fans came after them, arms outstretched to get just a piece of one of the three. The riders rolled single file across the narrow wooden bridge over the first pit, each one keeping a dozen paces distant, with Old Joe C. being the last to cross with the fans only a few feet behind. The crowd surged across the bridge filling it to capacity but their combined weight was just too much and the bridge collapsed; aided by a couple of strategically placed demolition packs on the main support. Several hundred fans fell eighty feet into six feet of oily liquid covered the bottom. The Brothers kept revving their choppers and yelling at the top of their lungs, urging the fans to come over to meet them and the crowd was happy to oblige, surging over the edge of the pit by the hundreds. Many who hit the liquid thrashed around before sinking but the pit continued to fill up until those that came after were stumbling across their oil-soaked compatriots to reach the other side. Once there they just gazed up hungrily at the leather clad riders and made clumsy attempts to scale the walls but not having the coordination to do it. Soon the hundred foot square pit was three-quarters full of our fans clawing for purchase among their fellows trying helplessly to make it up to the riders. When there was only about fifteen feet left from the top of the pile to the edge of the pit, Old Joe C. yelled to his Brethren, “Let’s light ’em up!” Each pulled a Molotov cocktail from the saddlebags on their bikes, lid the rag fuses, and smashed them down on to the top of the pile of squirming, grasping, moaning undead “fans” as dozens more cocktails were launched from concealed positions around the walls.   Within seconds, the pit of oily undead was an inferno as the first race of the day was over, save for the occasional gunshot ringing out from the main concourse as some latecomer had his ticket punched.
Old Joe high-fived his Brothers as the Chief watched the barbeque below from his position on the wall. Pit crews moved around the area with long metals spears and rifles in case any hot-headed fan made it to the top. He picked up the radio mike and said, “Open up the main gate, we’re ready for the second race today.”
A simple ploy in theory but quite effective when properly executed. Good story as well I might add.
Comment by Oppressed1 on December 21, 2010 @ 3:07 pm
didn’t like it to be honest. Writting was good but didn’t think the story was entertaining. Plus a few things that stuck with me. Nearly 4 months to build a race track just to kill zombies, hmm. Surly there could have been a more productive means to kill them. Still as a first submission not the worst. Hope you do more and improve each time, as many do.
Comment by Wade Cole on December 21, 2010 @ 4:50 pm
Actually man, I kinda liked it. Boo to the haters.
Comment by Ashley on December 21, 2010 @ 9:47 pm
Ah heck, it was fun and as an avid Harley rider I could even relate. I mean, you can’t shoot ’em all right?
Comment by Big H on December 21, 2010 @ 11:57 pm
Why not? A fun spin on a dirty job.
Comment by Joe on December 22, 2010 @ 8:13 am
I thought it was pretty good.
Comment by Bernie on December 22, 2010 @ 8:16 am
Not bad. I enjoyed it. Would like more details though. Like why are they building the race track, where do the survivors stay and how do they live? How do they find enough oily stuff for the fire? Etc…
Comment by Mercy on December 22, 2010 @ 10:35 am
The idea came from a construction site where there were four deep holes dug for the parking garages & foundations of buildings. This is the basis for the “race track.” The site was in the vicinity of two large wholesale warehouses; one for liquour & tobacco, the other for a Christian publisher; the barracks for the crews. On the Cumberland River were gasoline and diesel storage sites. The track walls incorporated buildings, elevated walkways, levees, and I-beam & concrete from the construction sites. Race track is just a euphemism for kill zone.
Comment by Patrick "Quartermaster" Owen on December 22, 2010 @ 1:38 pm
Good effort m8,very readable,,keep em comin
Comment by johnjack on December 22, 2010 @ 3:07 pm
A Nice idea for a story but it would have been a lot better for having your comment in the body of the story. A bit extra length to paint a more vivid picture would have really improved it imo. Good first effort tho.
Comment by Pete Bevan on December 23, 2010 @ 4:44 am
Quartermaster I liked this. Well done. The writing was good, the story was short, to the point and with few wasted words. If this is your first submission on the site then good for you. Good first entry.
Comment by Kevin F. on December 23, 2010 @ 1:47 pm
Good premise, good writing but no voice and shallow depths. I think I see where you were taking us and think I know what you were getting at but it demands too much supplementary storytelling via personal imagination. Who. What. When. Where. Why.
You told us them. It feels almost an outline.
Are there kudos though?
Yes.
It is a very GOOD outline.
You’ve creative mass disposal.
No obsessively thought-on reason for Z.
Intriguing character Lineup.
NO MAJOR GRAMMER AND SPELLING ERRORS!!! Bonus!
Comment by Ji on December 24, 2010 @ 10:09 pm
Ultimately, I liked this story. This story obviously takes place near the end of the zombie wars when humanity has risen above mere survival and is counterattacking, confident of ultimate victory. I feel the story is a bit threadbare, though. We need more character development. Also, adding unforeseen problems to the course of the ambush would have heightened the element of drama.
Comment by robsquill on December 24, 2010 @ 10:41 pm
lol! Very funny. NASCAR dudes wiping out zombies.
You mentioned the Cumberland River–are you from the Nashville area? (waves)
Comment by dixiehellcat on December 27, 2010 @ 9:54 pm
I like it mostly because people who enjoy the racing lifestyle would find ways to make it more entertaining and productive in the event of the zombie apocalypse.
Nicely done.
Comment by Terry Schultz on December 30, 2010 @ 12:57 pm
Hahaha this was an enjoyable read
Comment by Hope1719 on April 20, 2011 @ 1:13 pm
Great story! As ammunition would become quite scarce, other methods of zombie killing would be needed, this is a very clever way of doing this. Well done 🙂
Comment by john on September 21, 2011 @ 3:47 pm